Louis takes advantage of the situation, having the upper hand, and scares the protagonist, like any Bad Boy Junior would. “Has had a liking for you for quite sometime now, and we think it’s about time he gets what he wants”. “Our friend harry here -” he pauses to point at him he still has no emotion. And that’s when we all get the same question lingering in our brain: what are the motives behind the two murders (Keegan and the unknown girl) and then an abduction to take place? Quote (Lauryn POV): Liam starts laughing alongside the team (except Harry, because he’s The Bad Boy), amused for spotting a « peeping Tom», referring to Lauryn, since she’s the prime witness of the crime she attempts to flee but Louis catches her. Let’s remember him which a minute of silence. “No!” I scream as I see my boyfriends eyes role to the back of his head as the drop him to the ground.īy the way yes, Niall shots Keegan, now dead. In that split second I was going to tell them to put him down but the boy with the blonde hair, pulls out a gun and shots Keegan right through the head. I’m glad you’ve got your priorities straight, Lauryn! Some guys are blocking your boyfriend with their muscles while stopping you thanks to their… charm? Really, how can she just zone out like this? Quote (Lauryn POV): They’re bad boys, yes, but attractive, too. until I see Keegan pressed against a wall with five very tall and very attractive boys around him. Probably dead, my heart falls as I see the girl there, I think I might faint. Quote (Lauryn POV):Ĭhasing after Keegan to the ally way, I see a girl on the ground in a pool of blood. “Dark”).-Īnyway she follows him and reaches him. At least, though, this time the setting is made known (unlike in more popular fanfictions, i.e. He doesn’t even listen he just runs through the streets of downtown London, England to the ally where the scream came from.Įvgenij:- Add the postcode and there is everything. Also, the subtlety the author uses to describe the settings, I’m speechless. It’s funny how in a mall during December apparently only the protagonist and her boyfriend hear somebody’s cry. Suddenly a girl (who?) screams and Keegan goes for the rescue despite Lauryn’s protests. I beg of you to keep in mind this little detail, since the protagonist will readily forget about it, alongside thousands other things on the way. Sometimes I wish he would say nicer things, like ‘hi beautiful’ or anything besides just saying I was hot. As he bids her with a « Hey babe» she thinks, quote (Lauryn POV): With no further incidents she meets up with Keegan in the mall. With a change of point of view, we find out, thought, that he got in her way on purpose, as he apparently knows everything about her and he couldn’t resist getting closer to her, pleased to see her submissive reaction.Īnyway, she resumes her walk, uneasy while having the impression of « several sets of eyes watching» her, which are actually Harry’s and his cronies’.
On her way, she happens to collide with a brick wall that is immediately revealed to be Harry, a very tall stranger she also defines « the quite attractive man I might add», despite in that exact moment Harry is harshly scolding her for hitting him. Wearing her boots, she leaves her home to meet Keegan, her unknown-year-old boyfriend, for an appointment in the « mall downtown».
The story starts in December with Lauryn, our likable main character who, as this type of female protagonists we’ve learned to get familiar with, is transgressive and believes to be neglected from parental care. Jokes aside, I can guarantee you in this work, if anything, there is no grain of logic, both plot-wise and character-wise. When her life is flipped up side down by her insane and might I add attractive stalker what happens? Old she doesn’t know what the world holds, the people it holds, the crazy things it holds. Lauryn is a nieve girl, with her skater skirts and knee socks. Its ten-thousand-word-long content, split in thirteen chapters, has been viewed more than 353 thousand times. Today we’re going to talk about “ Stalker ➣ Daddy!Kink“, written by bambigirl23. It’s about average, but not less disturbing.
#JAMES AMNESIA POKEMON FANFIC FREE#
I hope my English won’t disappoint you readers: whenever you find some mistakes or typos, feel free to inform me.īut enough with formalities and let’s scrape a corner from the bottom of this dark barrel. It’s a pleasure to meet you all! This will be the translation of my own first review for the Demons. I discovered the Demons of Wattpad’s existence just a couple years ago by chance and I couldn’t help but gather all the guts I could and ask them to join their team. I am JoSebach: I’ve been writing, reading and reviewing fanfictions as a hobby for several years by now.
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